FIRST FIFTY FOCUS
I understand how it feels to constantly second-guess yourself while working on a novel—and how tempting it is to give up when you’re unsure of the next step. Analysis paralysis is a thing in this craft! It’s heartbreaking how many manuscripts with incredible potential remain stuck on a hard drive or gathering dust on a shelf.
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That’s why I offer First Fifty Focus, a comprehensive assessment designed to uncover the potential in your novel's first fifty pages and to provide you with a clear, actionable path forward.
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For a flat rate of $397, First Fifty Focus provides:
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A 3-6 page detailed analysis of your first fifty pages focusing on themes, pacing, narrative flow, structure, imagery and descriptive language, use of concrete details, emotional resonance, character introductions, and reader engagement. This package also includes a summary of strengths, weaknesses, and specific suggestions for improvement.
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A 45-minute consultation via phone or Zoom, where we’ll discuss the review, brainstorm adjustments, and map out what’s ahead for your manuscript.
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A recording of the consultation, so you can revisit our conversation anytime.
I take a limited number of clients each month, so don’t wait to secure your spot. Let’s transform those first fifty pages into the powerful opening your story deserves.
Ready to make your First Fifty shine?
Questions?
FAQ Page
info@writestartfictionstudio.com
Developmental Edit
For authors looking for big-picture feedback. What's working in your story's opening? What isn't? Is it engaging? Will it hook readers, or will they set it down? Let's talk about it!
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In-depth review focusing on themes, imagery, details, emotions, structure, character introduction, pacing, and flow.
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Marginal comments inside manuscript
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Editorial letter with suggestions for improvement (3-6 pages)
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Line edits, copyedit, or proofing
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Consultation
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Developmental Edit: $6/page - includes detailed marginal comments
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Comprehensive Developmental Edit: $6/page + $180 - includes marginal comments and editorial letter
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Submission Format: Times New Roman, double-spaced, 12-pt. font, 1-in margins
Questions?
FAQ Page
info@writestartfictionstudio.com
Line Edit
This package focuses on clarity at the line and paragraph levels to ensure the manuscript’s text is polished and professional. For authors confident in their big-picture content.
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Thorough line edit to address grammar, diction, and syntax and to tighten the prose
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1-page summary of overall strengths and weaknesses and suggestions for improvement
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2 passes of edits before returning to client
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Copyedit or proofing
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Consultation
Pricing: $7 per page
Submission Format: Times New Roman, double-spaced, 12-pt. font, 1-in margins
Questions?
FAQ Page
info@writestartfictionstudio.com
À La Carte Services
Tailor the editing process to your specific needs.
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Additional Pages or Chapters — $7/page ($180 minimum): Extend your editing package to include more of your manuscript.
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Additional Consultation — $149/45 minutes: Discuss editorial feedback, brainstorm solutions, and receive personalized guidance on your next steps.
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Additional Revision Rounds — $3/page: Receive another round of editorial feedback after revising your manuscript.
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Expedited Editing — Starting at 25% Additional ($100 minimum): Need a faster turnaround? Priority scheduling may be available for an additional fee, depending on your deadline and project scope. Subject to availability and approval before booking.
Questions?
FAQ Page
info@writestartfictionstudio.com
Extras
​Sample Edit Service
Get a feel for April’s editing style with a complimentary sample edit of 3 pages. For line edits, this sample includes a detailed line edit that tightens, refines, and clarifies sentence structure and word choice. Content feedback is also provided through a brief editorial letter.
Pricing: Free
Submission Guidelines
Format: Times New Roman, double-spaced, 12-pt. font, 1-in margins. Microsoft Word (no Apple Pages). Google Docs also acceptable (email link to info@writestartfictionstudio.com.)
Save file: Author Last Name_Manuscript Title_Editing Package (e.g. Austin_Pride and Prejudice_Critique Package)
